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[Cardboard City]

Nice

When I first saw the thread, I thought "MorrowDays has lost it." But it turned out amazing. The texture worked perfectly. I think it would be great to make a series (i.e. start a storyline) about Cardboard City.

Good job, sorry I didn't join it!

MorrowDays responds:

haha, I have lost it! :)

a series could be fun.

[Blockhead: Episode 9]

Liked the new art

The new art was good. Some of the consciences new angles aren't as good, but it's nice to have the variety.

But I like it just as much as all the other Blockhead episodes :)

[Owls]

lol

Yet another great song by TheWeebl! Very nice, especially about Simon =p

[A Great Woods Adventure]

Nice -- the best first Flash I've ever seen!

That was incredible for a first Flash. The art was decent, the animation was smooth, the music had a good sound quality, and there was a story (it was really basic, but it was still there!)

If this is what you are able to do in your first Flash, I can't wait to see what kind of great things you will make when you become experienced.

Good job, and good luck!

[The FLF Collab]

Lord-of-the-Crayons was the best

Nice job, it was smooth. Lord-of-the-Crayons made his part look incredible, smooth, AND funny.

I would've rated higher except for several instances of unnecessary adult content >_>

doomshock responds:

i agree, it was a great part
sorry you dont like adult stuff :(

[Mini Stickbattle]

Nice music

Nice choice on music. The backgrounds were a bit choppy (obviously tiled), and the animation/art wasn't really good. Also, I would personally only give this a Mild Violence rating.

Good lightsaber though =p

[nymph in love with tree]

Nice idea, good art

The idea was decent, and the art was nice. While I don't want to sound negative in this review because I liked the movie, I would like to give some advice.

The animation was a bit choppy--especially the squirrel. I know it can be hard to animate little woodland creatures, but it would be nice for that to be smoother.

Some of the things were redundant, as has been said before, such as the offering food to the tree. It was funny the first time, now make her do something else ;)

Finally, I would suggest a menu or at least a nice-looking ending animation (you have a white screen with credits scribbled on there). A nice ending page would make this animation all the better.

Again, I really liked this animation, but there are some things to consider when you animate your next Flash!

Luke

ningaJanena responds:

thanks! yeah... i agree with everything you've said.

time is a killer when you have to pump out a project for a class deadline smoothing frames get sacrificed and same with scenes. and I didn't write what the nymph was going to be doing, I just animated it, the director wanted her to be eating popcorn with the tree and wanted to be eating take out with it in another scene, so that's what I animated.

but thanks for your input I really appreciate it :)

[SSBB Theme Decoded]

Omelet Prevail!!

I've spent the last (week? two weeks?) conquering that game, and saw the latin translation during the credits. But the American translation you made is far funnier--I laughed out loud, which I don't usually do. Very nice, very humorous, and it gives me something to sing as I eat my breakfast omelet.

5/5, 10/10!

[Brawl is here!]

I'm still waiting for my preorder =p

That song was annoying, but it's pretty much how I think tomorrow is going to be for me (Brawl should come in the mail tomorrow). Even so, I was very happy when the end of the song came around =p.

Nice job.

[Alex Seryoua: Episode I]

Excellent art, okay animation

The graphics were great, and the voices were also very good. The animation, however, wasn't that good (walking, lip syncing, shooting things out of her arm, etc), and the shakey camara effect didn't work quite right--it wasn't pulled off correctly.

So, good work on the drawings, now you just need to work on your animation movements and lip syncing ;)

danomano65 responds:

thanks for being positive and negative without being a fucking prick. i'll see what i can do.