ShirkDeio's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Purple Kyuubi]

Didn't Vote

What program are you using? You need to read some tutorials.

The song started horribly. The beat was annoying, and claps should NOT be going at the same time as the claps--every other beat. Not to mention that the clap needs some work.

The place where the beat starts going faster doesn't work. It's all off-beat.

at :55 seconds, you actually have the beat right with the claps and stuff where they should be. Now you need a melody and some bass. Every instrument shouldn't do >> - - - - - - - --- << that beat. The only thing that should do that is the bass.

Then you need a melody--a catchy tune or something.

I couldn't bring myself to vote 0, but I can't vote any higher, so I didn't vote on it. Sorry, but this needs a ton of work.

(If you are using FL Studio by any chance, I might be able to help you a bit)

TheUrbanNinjaGirl responds:

i'd just like to say... FUCK YOU!! i hate people that think they are better than me!!! i have a LD (Learning Disability) so i have trouble with things like this... no more bad reviews, OR YOU ALL CAN JUST BURN IN THE BOWLS OF HELL!!!!!!!!

[A Little Rhythm]

Alright

The intro is good--it had me hooked.

Then I realized that the "intro" was the whole song. All it did is repeat the same thing over and over for the first minute >_<

The person singing is distracting...it needs to be better blended and effectized.

The guitar thing at about halfway was okay. Then it goes back to repeating the intro.

Overall, this song needs some work--more diversity throughout the song, better effects on the singing, etc.

5/10, 2/5

r-17 responds:

Shirk, thank you for your feedback! I may have gotten a little carried away on the vocal mixing since it's the first I've ever really dabbled in it (i.e., using it as a more of an effect rather than a message). More work it shall have, likely with chord progressions and slightly more complicated rhythmic overlay.

[Solus- Dragon Dance]

LOL

I don't have anything to say except that I was laughing throughout the whole song. XD. 7/10, 4/5.

Good work on it, though. I could tell there was a good bit of work put into this.

SolusLunes responds:

Glad to hear you like it :D

Never intended it to be funny, but I suppose it may be :D

[!!!Warning!!!]

Not the best song, but....

This song is interesting. I thought it was way too long, especially considering that it was pretty much the same thing repeating over and over.

The claps aren't too good, if you used FL Studio, try adding a Fruity Reeverb to them to make them more full.

This would've done better a little shorter, maybe a loop.

At the beginning of the song, it was too slow and quiet to give the listener a feeling of "hurry up and get outta there" like you said. Later on in the song, though, it does portray the "rushed" feeling--good job on that.

Overall, average song. 6/10, 3/5.

scorpinox responds:

Thank you! I'm trying to cut down the time on my songs so they don't seem too long. Hmm.... Fruity Reverb huh? I'll look into it on my next song. Thanks for the tip!

[[F-777] Aqua Dream]

Great Music (though a little repetitive, though)

9/10, 4/5. Great song, I'm definitely downloading and keeping this one to listen to. The only problem I have with it is how much diversity it lacks--it's just a little too repetitive. But I'm not really one to talk, since lack of diversity is one of my biggest problems >_<

F-777 responds:

Thanks man. =D

[Karco -- Aurora --]

Great Music!

I enjoy listening to this song. There's a lot of good stuff in there, I like it!

It stands out from many other songs, giving it high originality.

The instruments blended well, and there were no conflicting parts of the song.

The song kept me listening until the end without getting bored--actually, it kept my foot tapping mostly.

I can tell you put lots of good work into this one. Good job, I hope I will be able to make something like this someday =p

Karco responds:

Glad you like it - it's definitely my best so far. You'll be able to make something like this someday, I'm sure, just keep at it. Thanks for stopping by to review... :)

[!Touch The Sky!]

Good for what it was

I liked the song, though it lacked originality--it wasn't distinct from many other Trance songs I have heard. I also am not the biggest fan of the style it was done in, but , trying to be objective, this was a great piece for the style.

It sounds like it would be great for a loop in a Flash Animation, which can be good and bad at the same time.

But, there is a lot this song has to offer, because it gets REALLY good after the first half. That makes up for the averageness of the first half. It's faster, and sounds good. There is also a great use of the 'booming' sounds.

Overall, good song. 7/10, 4/5.

A-New-Decade responds:

thanks for your input. i relly didn't think it was going to do this well actualy lol. listen to my newest song The New Energy, it's way better =]