ShirkDeio's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Submission for contest!!]

Wow, this stinks

Sorry, but a looping, sloppy-looking animation is not entertaining or interesting at all.

[Flash music vid 4(FMV4)]

It's alright :D

It was a decent attempt, and a good concept, but it didn't have good energy--it wasn't interesting, if you get what I'm saying.

For some constructive criticism, I'd say you should work on better-quality effects and such. For the most part, it seemed "scribbly." But, I am glad you liked my song and put it into a video--that's a first for me :D

Anyways, try taking some tutorials on effects for FMV5, check http://www.flashkit.com/ and http://www.flashperfection.com/ for some good tuts.

Good luck!

zone12 responds:

thanks

[Wii Are Sold Out]

LOL

I've been looking for a Wii for a year. I've been cracking down, and calling everywhere, going everywhere, and looking at every Wii tracker website that exists. I even gave away my social security number because they promised a free Wii (scratch that lol).

I actually have called Target twice today, and I plan on calling once or twice tomorrow. XD

[Freezepop's JEM!]

Nice

It was alright--synched well, though. I also like the song. I think your flash deserved more than 1.69. Nice job on the front page, too.

[Stan and Joe Shorts 1]

Nice

Nice movie. Here are some improvements that could be made:

- Parts of the animation were a bit sloppy
- You could hear "click" at the end of people talking
- You could hear a puff of air at the beginning of people talking

Regardless, they're funny. Is this going to become a series?

adman responds:

- I got a bit lazy towards the end..
- The VA is sloppy but its hard to get good quality with a poor mic costing 5 pound :P

[777 - Part 7]

Nice--Needs Voices Though

Good animation and everything. Interesting storyline too.

I think you should try to get a couple voice actors if possible--it would make it much better.

Gook luck with your next ones!

[Newgrounds Outro]

Honestly, it stinks...

I can see the effort you put into it--you found some sounds and did a couple of tweens. But it is not catchy--it is, to be painfully honest, quite boring to watch. It's slow, and I wouldn't personally put it in my Flash submissions.

Two other things. First, why would you need an outro? Secondly, if this is meant to be an outro for anyone to use, you should've posted a download link in the description.

Anyways, I hope you can improve this in the future. Good luck.

plant-eating-cat responds:

you need a outro to finish a movie , im not saying its perfect but its not been done before , so atleast give me praise for the idea

[NG Profehshinal Advert]

Funny

It's really funny, I liked it :D

Human Hominid and Mom 'n Me lol...

adman responds:

Shame there not real games eh ;)

[Black And White 6!]

Yay, More Black and White Goodness!

Good job, everyone! Very nice! I can't wait for the next one!

[My New Grounds]

Great Animation

That was a great job! Good idea, incredible animation! I can't believe no one thought of this before! Very nice.

As for why I'm giving it 3/5 instead of 5/5, I don't like the foul language. That's where I stand on that.

Anyways, barring the language, good job.