Score: 10

"Cool"

submission: Gravity Collab

date: August 14, 2008

Glad you liked my music enough to use it for the menu! Good flash :)

Score: 10

"Nice"

submission: Cardboard City

date: July 14, 2008

When I first saw the thread, I thought "MorrowDays has lost it." But it turned out amazing. The texture worked perfectly. I think it would be great to make a series (i.e. start a storyline) about Cardboard City.

Good job, sorry I didn't join it!

Score: 7

"Trivia is good, art is not so good, and a glitch"

submission: 4 Trivia

date: July 3, 2008

Good game. The trivia is good and the scripting is pretty good as well. However, the art wasn't so good (the font wasn't good, white backgrounds with black text isn't good, there was a lack of animation). The glitch I found is that the music overlaps itself and plays two instances of the song at the same time if you go back to the main menu.

My suggestion would be to work on the art, add some animation (even just making the pieces animate to the correct space instead of appearing there), and fix that glitch.

:D

Score: 8

"Nice Game"

submission: Collectors

date: May 7, 2008

Nice game, thanks for the mention in the credits :D

Good luck on your next game!

Score: 7

"Lord-of-the-Crayons was the best"

submission: The FLF Collab

date: April 19, 2008

Nice job, it was smooth. Lord-of-the-Crayons made his part look incredible, smooth, AND funny.

I would've rated higher except for several instances of unnecessary adult content >_>

Score: 8

"Nice idea, good art"

submission: nymph in love with tree

date: March 29, 2008

The idea was decent, and the art was nice. While I don't want to sound negative in this review because I liked the movie, I would like to give some advice.

The animation was a bit choppy--especially the squirrel. I know it can be hard to animate little woodland creatures, but it would be nice for that to be smoother.

Some of the things were redundant, as has been said before, such as the offering food to the tree. It was funny the first time, now make her do something else ;)

Finally, I would suggest a menu or at least a nice-looking ending animation (you have a white screen with credits scribbled on there). A nice ending page would make this animation all the better.

Again, I really liked this animation, but there are some things to consider when you animate your next Flash!

Luke

Score: 7

"Excellent art, okay animation"

submission: Alex Seryoua: Episode I

date: March 7, 2008

The graphics were great, and the voices were also very good. The animation, however, wasn't that good (walking, lip syncing, shooting things out of her arm, etc), and the shakey camara effect didn't work quite right--it wasn't pulled off correctly.

So, good work on the drawings, now you just need to work on your animation movements and lip syncing ;)

Score: 5

"It's alright :D"

submission: Flash music vid 4(FMV4)

date: February 17, 2008

It was a decent attempt, and a good concept, but it didn't have good energy--it wasn't interesting, if you get what I'm saying.

For some constructive criticism, I'd say you should work on better-quality effects and such. For the most part, it seemed "scribbly." But, I am glad you liked my song and put it into a video--that's a first for me :D

Anyways, try taking some tutorials on effects for FMV5, check http://www.flashkit.com/ and http://www.flashperfection.com/ for some good tuts.

Good luck!

Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: Stan and Joe Shorts 1

date: January 22, 2008

Nice movie. Here are some improvements that could be made:

- Parts of the animation were a bit sloppy
- You could hear "click" at the end of people talking
- You could hear a puff of air at the beginning of people talking

Regardless, they're funny. Is this going to become a series?

Score: 3

"Honestly, it stinks..."

submission: Newgrounds Outro

date: January 14, 2008

I can see the effort you put into it--you found some sounds and did a couple of tweens. But it is not catchy--it is, to be painfully honest, quite boring to watch. It's slow, and I wouldn't personally put it in my Flash submissions.

Two other things. First, why would you need an outro? Secondly, if this is meant to be an outro for anyone to use, you should've posted a download link in the description.

Anyways, I hope you can improve this in the future. Good luck.