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Location: Rogers, AR
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Hopefully I will release something interesting soon :D
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Nice game, thanks for the mention in the credits :D
Good luck on your next game!
Author's Response:
Thanks, and hopefully, whatever my next game will be. Will be a lot better.
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Nice job, it was smooth. Lord-of-the-Crayons made his part look incredible, smooth, AND funny.
I would've rated higher except for several instances of unnecessary adult content >_>
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i agree, it was a great part
sorry you dont like adult stuff :(
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Nice choice on music. The backgrounds were a bit choppy (obviously tiled), and the animation/art wasn't really good. Also, I would personally only give this a Mild Violence rating.
Good lightsaber though =p
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The idea was decent, and the art was nice. While I don't want to sound negative in this review because I liked the movie, I would like to give some advice.
The animation was a bit choppy--especially the squirrel. I know it can be hard to animate little woodland creatures, but it would be nice for that to be smoother.
Some of the things were redundant, as has been said before, such as the offering food to the tree. It was funny the first time, now make her do something else ;)
Finally, I would suggest a menu or at least a nice-looking ending animation (you have a white screen with credits scribbled on there). A nice ending page would make this animation all the better.
Again, I really liked this animation, but there are some things to consider when you animate your next Flash!
Luke
Author's Response:
thanks! yeah... i agree with everything you've said.
time is a killer when you have to pump out a project for a class deadline smoothing frames get sacrificed and same with scenes. and I didn't write what the nymph was going to be doing, I just animated it, the director wanted her to be eating popcorn with the tree and wanted to be eating take out with it in another scene, so that's what I animated.
but thanks for your input I really appreciate it :)
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I've spent the last (week? two weeks?) conquering that game, and saw the latin translation during the credits. But the American translation you made is far funnier--I laughed out loud, which I don't usually do. Very nice, very humorous, and it gives me something to sing as I eat my breakfast omelet.
5/5, 10/10!
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That song was annoying, but it's pretty much how I think tomorrow is going to be for me (Brawl should come in the mail tomorrow). Even so, I was very happy when the end of the song came around =p.
Nice job.
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The graphics were great, and the voices were also very good. The animation, however, wasn't that good (walking, lip syncing, shooting things out of her arm, etc), and the shakey camara effect didn't work quite right--it wasn't pulled off correctly.
So, good work on the drawings, now you just need to work on your animation movements and lip syncing ;)
Author's Response:
thanks for being positive and negative without being a fucking prick. i'll see what i can do.
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Sorry, but a looping, sloppy-looking animation is not entertaining or interesting at all.
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It was a decent attempt, and a good concept, but it didn't have good energy--it wasn't interesting, if you get what I'm saying.
For some constructive criticism, I'd say you should work on better-quality effects and such. For the most part, it seemed "scribbly." But, I am glad you liked my song and put it into a video--that's a first for me :D
Anyways, try taking some tutorials on effects for FMV5, check http://www.flashkit.com/ and http://www.flashperfection.com/ for some good tuts.
Good luck!
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thanks
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I've been looking for a Wii for a year. I've been cracking down, and calling everywhere, going everywhere, and looking at every Wii tracker website that exists. I even gave away my social security number because they promised a free Wii (scratch that lol).
I actually have called Target twice today, and I plan on calling once or twice tomorrow. XD
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