Oww, my ears...
The intro is horrible. I have nothing good to say about it.
The first half was incredibly boring. It repeated pretty much the same thing over and over. The nasty sounding thing that plays three quick notes together is horrible--it gets really repetitive and annoying.
At about 2 minutes, the song sounds like it might redeem itself, but screws around until 2:43, when it gets to be not so bad.
Then as it enters the third minute, it goes back to the boring stuff again.
Overall, this song isn't very good. It is incredibly boring, repetitive, and needs some work. For one, the thing that plays the three notes together needs to be replaced or removed--it stinks.
Try listening to other Dance/Trance tracks and following their examples--it needs melodies, not repetitive things that hit three times.
Sorry for the low score, but that's all I can give this song. 1/10, 1/5.